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A Wondering Mind by Lisa Greer's avatar

Sorry I'm going to try this again. We're getting a storm in the area and it's iffy with my connection apparently. As an executive resume writer who has done many resumes and other career documents for senior professionals, I have a few quick suggestions. If this is the resume you are submitting online, I would cut the length to two pages at most, remove the Summary, add metrics to 75% of all bullet points in the resume at least, drastically reduced the Technical Tools section to 10 to 15 technical skills with no major write-up, and add an Achievements section. I didn't see one in my quick perusal of the resume, but that's the place to offer up three or four of your big wins including metrics of course.

Please take this in the friendly spirit it is intended. ATS is definitely a bear, and I see candidates get rejected all of the time until they make these changes. Many are experiencing the same thing you mentioned--no callbacks, emails, interviews, or hits at all until they make adjustments like this. If this is just the long form version of your resume that you are giving directly to contacts, then please disregard. Wishing you much success in the future!

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Sight Lines's avatar

You should connect with this organization: https://www.humanetech.com/

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